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Out of My Mind

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Two seeming
Arbitrary constants
Probing eyes
Plumbs of time without end
Peering inward
Beyond commonsensical capacity
Love dances Magnus Minimus

 

Harmonics of tears and laughter
Echo from you…me?
Who knows the searcher from the searched?
L'eau naturel
Electric network
Of stunning bathos reversed
No longer repulsed
Love dances Magnus Minimus

 

The joy is no longer just
Pain
No more commitment to the negative sun
Source of self-creation is rejected
Legacy evaporates
Into acceptance
Love dances Magnus Minimus

 

Of
Us
No further synthesis
Is needed
Spontaneous combustion of passion
Rains hiss on avid fires
Love dances Magnus Minimus

 

There is no such creature as
Higher Order of
Linear Ordinary Differential
Equations and Solutions
Angst rings in the telephone, but still...
Love dances Magnus Minimus

412730
What's the next logically sequential number?
Laughter and rain
Love dances Magnus Minimus
The human mind can't resist order
That's a sorrowful fate to heap on humanity

Author notes

Two seeming
Arbitrary constants
Written December 22nd, 2004

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  • Northern Downpour
    November 7, 2006
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    Hm.. good write! Though I had to look some of the word up in the dictionary!


  • pulsating
    January 3, 2006
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    the next logical number would be a negative number
    and then a positive one following it
    perhaps a very high one to cancel out the other.

    Good write as usual.

    Olivia


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    January 1, 2005
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    Sow a thought, reap a feeling
    sow a feeling, reap an act
    sow an act, reap a habit
    sow a habit, reap a character
    Sow a character, reap a destiny
    Sow a destiny, become a...poet?
    LOL! Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.


  • mad hattie
    January 1, 2005
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    a fine addition to the Universe

    (not sure why yet, but here goes "It's all in the mind"--from "Yellow Submarine"

  • Delirus
    December 23, 2004
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    weird

    hihihi, great, i like

  • darc tears
    December 23, 2004
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    This piece is amazing. You have a way of words. Your phrases and ideals eacho each other in a profound way. This poem shows intelect and a love of a deeper meaning to life.


  • jantastic gold member
    December 23, 2004
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    This, I like. Wonderful turns of phrase and wordage that adds to the feel of the piece and challenges the reader to think. You create a wonderful sense of things being beyonf "commonsensical" (love that!). Bookmark material... Well done.


  • Conni
    December 23, 2004
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    I agree with the above comment, it's very interesting. And I love the picture! Uhm.. don't have much else to say..
    Much Monkey Lovin
    Conni

  • ecrivain01
    December 23, 2004
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    Bien intéressant.

    Isn't it though. Bien intéressant.

    Jim Dunlap

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