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Boo-rah

Boo-rah
That's my name
From the football game I didn't win
To my indulgence into sin
I won't be gaining any fame
But Boo-rah is my name

Boo-rah
Is what I hear
When struggling to live down that night
When I remember the screaming fight
The broken bottle of Dad's beer
Boo-rah's what I hear

Boo-rah
Is what I bleed
While hiding the tears behind this face
With memories that I can't erase
On mixed emotions I still feed
Because Boo-rah's what I bleed

Boo-rah
That's how I feel
After fighting with my dear old Dad
And making him so very mad
With fists of fire, fists of steel
Boo-rah's how I feel

And as he lay there on the floor
So drunk that he could stand no more
This young boy still felt the pain
Cause Boo-rah is his name

Author notes

I left home a few months back.  Tired of being hit.  Boo-rah is what my friends call me.
Written December 22nd, 2004

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  • Mythtress
    February 4, 2005
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    Oh Boo-rah... I wish I could hug you much. Take care of yourself. Be sweet.

  • Hobbit Warrior
    December 30, 2004
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    Huh. Damn good write. Angsty without being cliche, I tip my hat to you my friend. As for your situation, wish you the best.
    Amanda


  • December 30, 2004
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    Well written and I hope writing has helped you out.

  • DreamSearcher
    December 30, 2004
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    Well written and I hope writing has helped you out. It had a great flow to it and a style all its own. Hope everything works out for you Boo-rah.


  • cosmicrose
    December 30, 2004
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    Good flow... hope you found yourself in a much better space Boo-rah

  • fallendreams
    December 30, 2004
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    I hope that writing this helped ease some of the pain and that your situation is better now. It is impossible to explain what happens to us sometimes. I just hope you grow stronger as a result. God bless you.

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