sage Santa says
seek serenity
stop squabbling
me and my beau
beneath mistletoe
kisses won't whoa
reindeer in rain
cannot make sleigh slide
presents not present
Author notes
Billbard.Alliteraku and rhymer.
Written December 22nd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- CHRISTMAS FUN HERE WE COME!! by mAgAn1888.
415 points, ended December 23, 2006, 11 entries
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What did you think
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ohh,soo good
Oh,this is so clever,so very clever,it makes it so very good. A great inspired piece,which I shall certainly read again and again -
These are wonderful haiku
I love the alliteration in the first one. Awesome work here. Thanks for entering and best wishes 
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LOL ...
this is great. Merry Xmas. May your Christmases all be like this one.
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I don't know much about Haiku's, they always seemed lind of strange to me. Anwyays, this was a very cute poem. Thansk for entering my contest. Merry christmas and good luck!
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All is well here in haiku land!
Wonderful haiku and I like them so much!
Thank you for your smart poetry... * wish I could write haiku and do so well. 
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sure Bill, pass me the haiku entries where you're getting pecked away by old chicks SANS GLOW of course, and then throw this un-whoa-able kissing haiku into this contest. For sure, I'll remember this next time you make an entry to one of my contests!!!
Best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo
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nice poem but i don't really get it.i think you spelled some things wrong
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Good job.
Clever and cute as well. Good job. -
I knew i forgot something, i must go out right away and get some mistle toe
Merry christmas
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Tal.Thanks for the invitation but at age 90 I think I am a bit old for any AP group.Thanks also for reading and commenting.Old Bill.
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Very good
I enjoyed these poems very much. I like the image of two lovers under mistletoe. How sweet! -
enjoyed the contrasts in these two poems...& maybe i should get myself a mistletoe to stand under...hhmmmnn...
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great
short but nice.
Keep up the good work and I would be honored if you joined my Poetry Group (The LoseR Outfit) at this link.
http://allpoetry.com/poet/group/The%20LoseR%20Outfit
All you have to do it go there and click the think where it says join this group. Hope to see you there.
~Tal
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