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Solitude

She hears all they say,
And she turns darker shades of blue,
Rumors this week say she’s a snob,
But that’s not true

She walks alone each day
And they just stare,
How can they say the things, they say
When they don’t know her.

They just don’t understand
She doesn’t have an attitude
All she wants..
Is her Solitude.

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Written December 21st, 2004

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  • wbluerose02
    February 4, 2005
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    Superb

    WOWWWWWWWWWWWW nice job I like how your words flowed into this fine write.I give this Two Thumbs Up,and thank you for sharing this with my family and I. Keep up the amazing job.

  • Mnaxcvkj
    January 26, 2005
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    alright well... i have already commented on this but hey what the heck!!! Yay!! your closer to 200 now!! alright im hyper and hungrey and .. umm.. hungry? lol i don't know which one is spelt right.. hehe
    jess
    Edited on Jan 26, 11:00 because 'i want some soup!'.


  • January 18, 2005
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    this was a good poem and i think it was written very nicely.
    thank-you for the comment on my poem.
    jeff

  • Mnaxcvkj
    December 28, 2004
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    wonderful

    hehe great write Jackie! I give it a 10 and a half out of five! yay!! thnx for the comment on my poem!
    love ~Missy~