She flies to the softest place of nature,
High atop the tallest trees
She's a vision of angelic beauty
Among natures greenery
Pausing for a brief moment,
While butterflies advance
Birds flutter around her wings
As she flies among natures dance
She revels in this glory,
As she gathers love from the earth
Treasures that she gently touches
Are sparkling anew with rebirth
Deep in the forest,
Within the glow of the sun's deep rays
Colors of magnifience
Are aglow with rainbows glaze
She pauses for a moment,
To hear her heart softly beat
Finding a place to rest
In the hiddden forest deep
Close our eyes but for a moment,
Feel the wealth the fairy surrounds
For she is natures gaurded treasure
With her stardust, life abounds
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Written August 23rd, 2002
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excellent
I'm so very fond of faires, I couldn't resist reading this one too! I could actually see her dancing and spreading her fairy dust. Lovely... as always! -
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Very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very well written poem. -
excellent
Such a soul-soothing poem... where would some people be without the gentle guidance and beauty of faeries? Your words are close to that of a lullaby. Absolutely lovely. -
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I am a fan of imagery, and this sates my thirst. I love the thought behind this.
~J-chan~ -
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Absolutely Beautiful and so magical! :) -
Thanks so much you all
Blessings
Susan~~~~ -
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Superb write. Simple, singular, super. -
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I love faeries sooo much, this is absolutely delightful. Thank you.
~Alice~ -
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I rode the wave, nice work.
I'm a sucker for fairies -
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awwwwwwww i wanna see too! Val -
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*Smiling ...
Absolutely delightful Susan
Hugs
Sammy
( A much better picture would be hard to find) -
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gorgeous! i love faeries too!!! :) :) :) they're so perty. your picture is lovely too. thanks for sharing. -
awh thanks Sis
i love fairys i collect them :) Boyd's Bears Wee Folkstone Collection lol.....cost an arm & leg but oh so pretty........
Blessings
Susan~~~~
Edited by Blushfulmoon on Aug 24 because 'error!:)'. -
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Beautiful Sis..lovely expression as always..you do these soooo well!!!!..~~~GILL~~~ -
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i closed my eyes!!!!!!!!!
this is magical, mystical!!!!!!!! -
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absolutely beautiful. Enchanting and mystical... Loved it! -
Thanks so much Gayla~~
Blessings
Susan~~~~ -
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Wonderful write to match the picture Susan! Nicely done!
~Gayla~ -
Thank you Canine
Blessigs
Susan~~~~ -
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Nice the beautiful. -
i love fairy's i collect them they are so enchanting
I appreciate all the lovely compliments
Blessings
Susan~~~ -
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I have a body lotion called 'Wood Nymph'. :) Reminds me of this poem...or is it for Nymphos? LOL -
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Aweeee, this is so pretty!! Love the fairy pic! :) Enchanting...and serene. This poem has been approved by the Pee Pee Fairy Princess. HUGS
Edited by Lone Poet on Aug 23 because 'forgot. :)'. -
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I loved the way this flowed the picture and all set me at ease. For I am unable to find it no place but here. Thank you so very much -
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Susan wonderful you write...;) Always full of magic and stardust and fairies and such, I adore this one...;)
Love and hugs, ~ Ce -
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beautiful flowing piece about fairies you make it sound like you'd love to join them so soft and peaceful :))pjs -
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Love fairies.. This is a excellent write...Such softness in your writing...Well done!....CaUsAL~...:*) -
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You got me with this one. I love fairies and butterflies. That picture was beautiful, but not as beautiful as this poem. You use words to your fancy and they always come out so wonderful. I pictured this whole thing.
Flutter by sweet fairy,
~Sarah~ -
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nice poem i like that.
Good job :)
Matt -
Thank you so much for the lovely compliments Tina
Love ya hun:)
Smiling
Susan~~~ -
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oh! & the pic is absolutely delightful! -
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beautiful...esp that last stanza, flows smoothly & delicately
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