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Disaster

Shouting
Crying
People Dieing
Disaster is among us
Following our every happiness
It shows no mercy
Does not repel
You will not live long
You are now in hell

It finds one thing
And takes it away
You are forever a slave
Until that one special day
You are saved by another

Disaster follows your path
Looking in at Small amounts
Until that one time
The only time that counts
Disaster strikes again
Leaving you alone
Nobody there
Disaster has came again
Claiming you its slave
Forever you will be owned
Until you pull the trigger
Cut with a blade
Or sleep the deepest helping sleep
Your gone
No longer a slave to disaster
No longer in Hell
Your Gone

Author notes

... Eh. I don't like it very much.. KT Kitty says its awesomest though xP
Written December 20th, 2004

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  • Can u see me
    December 23, 2004
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    You wrote this at my house xP Nyah nyah...I feel spethial! umm...not lol
    Mwahha...good job Hopeh! I still think it's awesomist! xP

  • DarkCryingAngel
    December 20, 2004
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    nice colors, I liked the poem alot. Good job.