i offer you my heart
you start to take it
i offer you my heart
you turn away to purchase another
i looked at you with love
you looked right back at me
i looked at you with love
you looked right past me
i waited for you
you came to me
i waited for you
you left me alone
i shielded myself from you
you get angry
i shielded myself from you
you brush it off and forget i was ever there
i offered you my heart
i looked at you with love
i waited for you
i shielded myself from you
you took my heart and gave it bak
you looked at me with love and then looked past me
you came to me and then left again
you get angry and then brush it off and forget me
you've messed with my head long enough
i've reached the breaking point
i love you and hate you more than you can ever kno
tell me which one you want...
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Written December 20th, 2004
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*waves* thanks for reading it, im all better now
~K~
Edited on Dec 27, 1:10 p.m. because ''. -
thanks, im glad you like it and sorry you can relate
~K~
Edited on Dec 24, 6:06 p.m. because ''. -
*spins around* Oh! POEM! *reads* aww! *cries and hugs* Poor dear... good emotion!
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ya, This is an awesome one, I can relate to it way too much. The form is kind of choppy, but It still hits the heart. I love this one, Alot. You r such a talented writer. josh
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