Sleepy
I've had such a day
I need to take a nap
That silly mouse got away
And I was such a sap.
I forgot about that hole
In the corner of the room
I ran him through the kitchen
And almost to his doom
He gave me quite a run
I thought I had him once
But he rounded the corner
It made me quite the dunce.
So I'll take my nap now
I need a little sleep
I'll get back to him later
I'll have a stronger leap.
That little cad I'll get
I'll be on him so fast
Before he can realize
I'm onto him at last.
Then we will have
His funeral march
His little body
Stiff as starch.
Right now I'll take my nap
Refresh my self a bit
And when I awaken
I'll then be much more fit.
Yawwwwn
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Written December 20th, 2004
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Thank you, Andrea. I hope you know you could have missed some if you wanted. LOL Of course, you'd probably miss something. hehehe Hugs, Patricia
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awww, this is just too darling! cute pic. i enjoyed reading thise. ( I am just overwhelmed right now for how many poems I have to read of yours, i'm way behind..better get goin, it might take me a year but i'll do it! lol)
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I'm glad I could make you smile. A cute kitten is always good for a grin. Hugs, Patricia
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This is soo cute... I love the pic of the kitten... You are always amazing me with the pic you have always fit your poems.. And the background is very cute as well... I liked this cute little poem
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LOL Thank you, Shinichiro. Does that mean my normal poems are traumatic? LOL Actually, I like to put in a few at times that even children can relate to. I hope you'll read more. Hugs, Patricia
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Just remember this: If they ever get loose, make sure you check the garbage disposal before turning it on. LOL
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Awww this is so nice I like it a lot!!! I'm going to read your other poems now, because compared to allpoetry.com's normal poems, this was very calming and refreshing. It was just what i needed, thanks for writing it! ^_^
~Shinichiro~
Edited on Dec 20, 10:42 p.m. because 'I accedentally made it sound liek I didn't like your other poems! Bad word placement!!'. -
yet another good job
Crazy cat. Cute poem. Makes me want two of those two little white mice I've been thinking of getting. I'd name them George and Lenny after the characters from Of Mice and Men. -
very good poem. cats are so funny sometimes. i could see the cat sliding around those corners and just pouting when realized the mouse got away. oh well, time to do what all cats do best...take a nap!!! nice. bobby
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Thank you, Nick. I have several poems much like this. I do different types of poems, and I think you'll like some of them.
I'm sorry your hamster died. I got all four of my children hampsters when they were little. One got away, and we couldn't find him until I turned on the garbage disposal. Oops! It was pretty sad. I'll check out your work. Thanks again and hugs, Patricia -
haha that was so coolio!! lol i think that was so random and brilliant...random is always the best!! i had a hamster in my room before..lived in there in a corner and made a lil house there. i fed it food every day and when i started smelling sumthin bad...i realised it was dead...oops! but i well liked your poem, if all your others are like this one im guna read them all
lol thanks made my night, toodles xoxo
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