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Is it enough?

Its late, darkness falls
Stars veiled by clouds of pain
Circles ring the blood red moon

Too many people are scared tonight
Wouldnt it be good if we could all be calm
Wouldnt it be great if everything was alright

We sit, stare, think, judge, cry,
we stand, shiver, freeze, love, hate and care
We feel, we touch, we taste
We do what we can to get by

But is it enough??

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Comments welcome as im new - well kind of my first few posts here are new
Written December 20th, 2004

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  • eres91
    December 20, 2004
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    I liked the depth that you created in this wonderful poem and I hope that you will keep writing