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Epitaph for Omar

I hold the tiny
Dying Zebra Finch in my hands
As the black eyes dull

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Written December 20th, 2004

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  • Trapped Rage
    December 21, 2004
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    *cry* I couldn't hepl it!

    Oh man, I'm gonna cry again. That was so sad and poignant. I'm sorry you are in pain, darlin'. -Amanda


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    December 20, 2004
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    Wow, very expressive. I can see it die in your hands..the sorrow is expressed in a wonderful way.

  • pozo
    December 20, 2004
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    Wow, this is a really deep poem which I liked a lot Thanks for commenting on my poem, this was excellent
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • pixyblade6
    December 20, 2004
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    wow i hate haikus, i realy do, if i was paying attention i would have never clicked on this. but, it think it was fate that did, cause i realy like this one, it sends a massive amount of emotions, good work, seriously.
    -pixy