There once was a green dragon,
had the meanest breath in town.
Every time this dragon spoke,
the smell would knock you down.
Everyone called him Stinky,
but his name was really Fred.
He didn't have to eat you,
one whiff and you'd be dead.
Stinky wanted a sweetheart,
he liked a horse named Blue,
one day he tried to kiss her,
she kicked him with her shoe.
Stinky was feeling lonely,
he left the town that day.
On a search for true love,
he would travel far away.
Stinky searched the meadows,
then he searched the towns.
Every where Stinky would go,
his breath made them frown.
Stinky went to live alone,
in his cave upon the hill.
To live a quiet existence,
lonely life quiet and still.
Something smelled wonderful,
as he got at home that day.
Someone had moved in his cave,
while he had been far away.
As they looked at each other,
one look took his breath away.
she did not mind his bad breath,
as she spoke to him that day.
Stinky finally found true love,
she was named Abby Rose.
He fell in love with a skunk,
by smelling through his nose.
Author notes
Written December 20th, 2004
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Wow, what a pairing; thanks for your entry into my contest
lol
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Fantastic!
A great story/poem. once again I'm impressed with your style and talent!
Regards,
Jennifer
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Hi Jenifer. Thank you for reading my poem. So appreciated. You take care. Sandy
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Very Cute!
You know, I really think this piece STINKS! Well, OK, I guess that's what it's supposed to do, huh? LOL! But seriously, I thought the ending was very catchy! I was wondering how you were going to conclude this. POOR STINKY! He was so all alone, but thankfully, Sandygram rescued him from his dilemma! Nice write! very creative!
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Great Comment!!!@
Yes Stinky was a Stinker.
hehehe Glad you enjoyed and it brought a smile. Nice to have you drop by. You take care. Sandy
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Great write! Another humerous and adorable write
Mylee -
This is cute.
Boy I wonder sometimes what those skunks eat that make them so potent. But skunks are really good gentle animals that care for their babies really well. This is cute sandy, really cute. -
I finally am catching up on yesterday's comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I was reading stories with my grandaughter over the weekend so i felt like writing a kid's poem. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day. Take care and God bless, Sandy
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leaving a nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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lol ok I so forgot to read the catagory before commenting....my bad.
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LOL. that was pretty good. funny ending. its kind of a chilish poem, which isn't nessisarily a bad thing, I thought this was very appropriate. well done. respects to the pen.
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Thanks for the nice comment. I,m glad you enjoyed the poem. Take care, Sandy
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V. Funny
Classic !!! You've got a cracking sense of humour !!! I was loving this from beginning to end.
Dragons are good. Monkeys are good . Skunks...well yeah they are also gooood.
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An absolute joy to read!
What an absolute joy! I laughed all the way through...wanted to give that boy some "breath savers", lol. How creative, I was captured by this, kept my attention all the way through, so perfect for children, but also a sheer pleasure for me, "The Big Kid",
This, I insist must take the Gold! Stinky wins in my book, all the way and his lovely skunk Rose! Not only was this funny, but heart touching as well! Ann 
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