is this all?
~No, cant be~
then what else?
~Nothing~
what?!
~What~
what else is there then?
~'Don't know~
then where is assurance that there is more?
~There isn't~
then how do you know?
~'Dont~
well what am i waiting for?
~You tell me~
i dont know
~Why not?~
Argh
~What?~
i'm waiting for real love
~Then wait~
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Written December 19th, 2004
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Ooh what a seering insight into exactly what life is - a load of questions, and obscure, unhelpful answers! I like this, it's different, and well thought out.
pinkxxx
p.s cheers for the comment on my poem -
This is a neat treatment of a self realization moment. I'm not sure but what you couldn't expand it even more - but it is a nice way to handle the dialogue. Thanks for reading my solar collector. Good luck. Stu
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