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love

Love
is it really?
can You promise?
beautiful & painful.
uncertainty & indoubtability.

Confusion
     and hope

Flowers
      wilting just for me

Scribbles unwinding

This  restless doom
This  lightless day

The silent orchestra plays a melody
    that my heart has long desired,
a whisper that awakens
  saying:
         it will be okay

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Written December 19th, 2004

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