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What you've done to me

What you've done to me.
What you've done to me is beyond words,
You've changed my life.
You've given me reason to look for the good,
in the not so good times.
What you've done to me is not the question,
But what you still do.
I once wrote poems that were sad,
I was also miserable too.
But now you show me there is much more to be had.
You are my lighthouse without day,
Without you I would deffinatly stray.
I have kept the truth from you once before,
but I swear it will happen never more.
The words"What you've done to me",
sounds like it would be bad.
But what is really bad is knowing
that you someday may go away

My wonderful boyfriend wrote this for me. It may not mean much to you but it's stuff like this that made me fall in love.

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Written December 19th, 2004

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  • fighter70454
    December 19, 2004
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    Thanks so much!!


  • Just A Goddess
    December 19, 2004
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    awwww....
    it should mean something to everyone!
    this is beautiful
    and packed with emotion
    I loved:

    What you've done to me is not the question,
    But what you still do.

    that was amazing!
    very lucky girl you are