Angel Waterfall
Watch While Winged
Angels Arrive Adoringly
To Tenderly Touch
Earths Ethereal Energy
Roaring River Running
Falls Forever Flowing
Auras Always Around
Lights Linger Longer
Leaving Lifetime Love.
Author notes
This is a alliterative acrostic~I am just learning how to do them
Notice the ANGEL in the bottom right hand corner
of the waterfall.
Written December 19th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- DARK loyalty by theDARK1.
330 points, ended January 24, 2006, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this contest has been long over due to be judged and i have to thank you so much for having the patience to continue to participate. i'm glad that i made it exclusively to those members that had me on their favorites list (because i'm sure other people would have complained about it not being judged in a timely manner. i came up with a way to judge this contest without any favortism involved. you will be assigned a bingo number and it will be entered in the cage for drawing. once each poem has been assigned with said number, then a drawing will be held and the list will be published in the order the balls come out of the cage. look for the ball number at the end of this comment.
still i am very impressed with this write. i think itz entirely creative and speaks volumes. one of my favorites from you!
thank you for entering, luvya, DARK
your ball is: o-75
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You make these sound so easy and yet it just feels natural, Like that is the way it is exposed to be. You are such a talinted poet in so many wonderful ways. Great work
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A wonderful play with words.. It was very fun to read and see the poem unfold. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.. Great work
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I like the Alliteration Acrostics. They are very interesting to create. I believe I myself have read this before as well but it was worth a second read and very worthy of this contest
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itz a good thing i am having this contest for all of you that have me on as your favorites. look at the great things i have been missing like this impressive piece. the picture is breathtaking. you did an outstanding job! this should have been a winner in an acrostic contest somewhere. itz just that good! this is 4 of 5 eligible poems that are entitled to be in the contest, thank you, DARK.
ps: thank you for putting your entry in this exclusive contest for you and select others. i will do at least two of these a year to show my appreciation for you loyalty. once the contest is over feel free to place this poem in someone else's contest, unless perhaps this becomes the winning entry of one of the trophies. in that case i prefer for you to always leave it here for when people come by this contest, they have the opportunity to read the winning selections. i will give you a hint about winning in the contest. the more you enter the better you increase your chances of winning and the same goes for commenting. that's all i will say, but you will understand once the contest is closed and itz judged.
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IT is a pleasure to read this one again. I can see how you have mastered this style. Very creative and well written.
SAm
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Cool
I'd probably have to sit with a dictionary looking for words. Love Mia
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YOu have done a fantastic job with this form for sure...and your graceful words are as beautiful as the angel in the waterfalls....stunning.
Sam
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Waterfalls are so mediating too Joan, just been making (re-building) a little web site the last week for an Angel friend right here in AP, she too (much like yourself) so loves those waterfalls and angels.
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The pic allon can realy magnify and bring the direction of wat u are expressing her i must say kudos to once again angelica nice work
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thank you Abdul, it was very hard to do, I'm glad you liked it~Joan;f
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joan wat a marvelous pokemi do like it so much am i just can`t fig out how u arrnaged this poem this is cool i must say to u friend it is so nice to see such
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Didn't you feel me take your hand and take you to the waterfall, such fun we had, watching the angels arrive at the waterfall..magical..Love you my Pixie~AAAJ
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Thank you Rora for your wonderful comment, believe me sweet, they are hard to do, but I enjoy the challenge~Love~Joan
have a happy Christmas my friend
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This is really really cool-by reading this great peice of work by you I learned one more way to write an acrosstic. Thanks
I thought it was great-you did an excellent job on it. Acrosstics can be difficult, and this looks even more so, but you did it wonderfully
~blessings~
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Heavenly
This is a beautiful and refreshing read to begin the morning with. I feel like I am at this Angel Waterfall right now. Like you skipped by and took me by the hand to lead me there with all your angels. Ahhhhhh Heavenly 
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Wow, this was a beautiful poem which I loved reading Thanks for commenting on my poem, this was amazing and wonderfully written
Thanks for commenting on my poem It might help if you knew it was about one of the few Labour politicians I believed in (him and the Primeminister, and maybe Prescott) and I'm from Yorkshire
All the best,
Pozo
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Beautifully written
Absolutely beautiful Joan. I just love waterfalls. Gives me such a feeling of peace and I especially like the angel watching over us. I agree with Hugh we all are very fortunate to have such a wonderful person with such a huge caring and loving heart writing us such spiritual writes such as this. I love this form of poetry and this was indeed excellent. Love you sweet lady. Hugs Alexis
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A Wonderful Waterfall of Words.
Angelica my darling Bea,
You writing is just getting more and more amazing. The alliteration here and the word choice make this poem flow like a waterfall inb a cascade of verbal melody.
This site is so fortunate to have a contributor with your huge heart, your angelic nature and your imaginative invention.
I applaud you, your heart and everything about you. Wonderful.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh. -
Beautifully written -powerful
Joan,
Beautiful poem. It warms the heart just knowing that there are Angels always watching out for us. The picture, I love it... I remember you showing me that one. Again, this poem looks so easy to write. Sometime I'll have to try this form. The background is very bright, was hard to get used to at first but I am used to it now. Love you so very much Joan and keep up the great work.
~ Kalen
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Thank you regret for your wonderful comment, and Happy Holidays to you and yours~angelica
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the picture and the poem are both beautiful. great job. it flows beautifuly. best wishes to you! and happy holidays too!!
*regret*
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