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To Katie

Dear Katie,
In the season of cheer,
I wish you a merry Christmas,
And that the clouds all clear.

Your mother is a wonderful woman,
And full of hope and love.
She's always there to help you along,
Like a beautiful white dove.

So as I end this little letter,
I ask you to be strong.
If you ever feel down,
Just sing a little song.

Author notes

For Katie, a young girl with an illness and also a person who has an amazing mother.
Written December 19th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • popular demand
    December 21, 2004
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    its so cheery that its cool...lol


  • MagicLady silver member
    December 21, 2004
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    I have read and applauded your poem. It is so beautiful to me. Everytime I go to to comment on any of the poems, I start to cry. I sat in the back yard with Katie yesterday on the glider swing. I have five different wind chimes and we sat out there after filling up the bird feeders and changing the bird bath. The wind was strong but not cold (we are in southern TX).

    I sat there with her and listened to the wind moving the chimes to whatever music it wanted to play, and listed the things I was grateful for. I sat looking at my backyard, knowing this was my last Christmas here in Texas. My husband is retiring in less than six months. He has been in the air force for 20 years. I was inspired looking out my backyard with Katie at my side, the birds singing, thanking us for the fresh food and bath, and the wind singing a special song.

    With that said, I write this little bit of insight for all of you. May you all have a blessed holiday.

    allpoetry.com/poem/957911

    Thank you for your poem.

    Cheryl


  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 20, 2004
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    Glad you like it, pozo. Thanks for commenting.


  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 20, 2004
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    Thanks, VanGaurd. It's good to know that people enjoy reading my poetry. Stay tuned!


  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 20, 2004
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    ^_^ Thanks, Imouto. Now I really feel special. XD

  • pozo
    December 20, 2004
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    Wow, this is a beautiful poem which I liked a lot It showed a lot of care and consideration, keep writing because this was lovely
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • VanGuard
    December 20, 2004
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    this was very beatiful poem.. very heartfelt and full of emotion.. great work and keep up the wonderful emotion

    ~VanGuard


  • Kikyo Minamino
    December 20, 2004
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    Lol aw shucks Michelle dont be so shocked. Lol Anyway wonderfl and caring write indeed. Wonderful job!!

  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 19, 2004
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    blink blink Young lady? Really? Wow..nobody's ever called me that before. Let alone Inspiring. Now I feel all warm and fuzzy. lol. Thanks, Nadir. I'm glad you like my poem.


  • DelWarrenLivingston silver member
    December 19, 2004
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    marvellous

    Michelle,

    What a thoughtful, uplifting and lovely poem you have written for Katie and her amazing Mom. I would applaude this ten times over if I could...you are an inspiring young lady.

  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 19, 2004
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    Anything for a friend of a friend. Glad you like it, Kimberly. I was happy to write for the contest. I felt it was time to write something anyway and--ooo..whats this?? HOLY SMOKES, ITS SNOWING AT MY HOUSE!!!!! goes to watch


  • Touchof1der silver member
    December 19, 2004
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    She most certainly does have an amazing mother Michelle. I was so happy to see you write something for the contest. You know, you are actually younger than Katie. She too is a teenager. I really appreciate you taking the time to write this and to reach out to a special friend and a very well liked and respected poet here on AP. You too are a wonderful gift Michelle! Bless you sweetie! Good luck in the contest!
    ~Kimberly


  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 19, 2004
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    Thanks, Mum! Glad you like it.


  • -theheartofme-
    December 19, 2004
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    from the heart and beautiful darlin...great great job!

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