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Merry Christmas to You

'Tis the season to show good spirit,
Deck the halls with holly.
Show the world the joy of Christmas,
And give good meaning to the word "jolly".

Now's the time to treat others,
To gifts of all shapes and sizes.
Mysteries await you inside the boxes.
Hurry to claim the prizes!

I hope you have and very merry Christmas,
And enjoy every minute,
Of this wonderful day of cheer and joy,
Just wrap yourself in it.

Merry Christmas and have a Happy New Year.

Author notes

Please send this to the boy. From Michelle Jackson.

Have a great Christmas
Written December 19th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • SEA angel gold member
    January 29, 2005
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    May your days be wrapped in joy & cheer

    A belated or early Very Merry Christmas to you as well. I especially like the last two lines of your poem as what an uplifting thought to wrap ourselves in cheer and joy.
    Edited on Jan 29, 9:08 because ''.


  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 28, 2004
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    Thanks, JR. I'm glad you like it.


  • J Rhys Davies
    December 28, 2004
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    This was a very endearing write. I liked the innocent feel within the lines. You did a nice job with this.

    ~ John

  • RockStarAngel7
    December 26, 2004
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    This was a nice write. Christmas is such a wonderful time of here. Full of friends, family, and Jesus! It's a wonderful time! (Not in that order!)

  • Dr John Celes
    December 24, 2004
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    good effort

    a lovely Christmas poem written for a boy to cheer him up and make him think of the many joys and merriment that Christmas season brings to all!It flows so easily and is written in simple style, making it a joyous read to any child.


  • Shadow Kitsune
    December 21, 2004
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    No problem, Saykori. I was glad to write a poem for him. I'm also sending a card.

  • Saykori
    December 21, 2004
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    He's going to love this poem!!! Thanks so much for entering it! It means a lot to me. Thanks Michelle!!!

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