a word can't be written and say what i have to say;
a colour could not compose how i feel today;
what words in what order could let me express;
what paper could let me puke up every emotion
and form it into art
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Written December 19th, 2004
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This sorta seemed to just drop off. I would've ended it with like,
"...art.
These feelings are immensly incomposable"
But I really liked the topic this was on, and I can relate. I've felt that way many times. It's just like "blah!" and you can't explanation. In your thrid line, you have a question mark and the a semi colon. Was that intended? Just wondering..if so, how should it be read?
I really liked this poem, anyway. Keep penning! (sorry...I just had to put it...as tacky as it sounds.
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