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What is hope?
I don't know where its gone,
I dont understand whats real,
All I want is you back,
I don't know what else to feel.
Im lost in a state of confusion,
my mind whirring with thoughts of you,
All i know is i miss our times together,
I want to know whats false and whats true?
Why did you have to go to that operation,
I didnt want you to,
Why didnt you stop me from going to that stupid party
When all i wanted was to be with you.
I love you so much,
I never told you that enough,
Is this my fault
For being too moody and sometimes too rough?
I till expect you to walk though my door
Saying you want a cup of tea,
Or storming up the stairs,
Just to have a go at me!
I miss you and love you and always will
But right now im lost and dont know how to feel!
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Written December 19th, 2004
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well written, and very sad
i can relate to the words in the first two paragraphs, i know far too well the feelings that go with them
ty for commenting on my poem -
Wow, this is a really sad poem- excellently written but really sad
Great poem, keep writing because this was deep.
Best wishes,
Thanks for commenting on my poem,
Pozo
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