I am waiting in the darkness..
No light shining through.
No one here to comfort me..
I am waiting here for you.
I don't know where I am..
I am dazed and confused.
I don't know who will help me now..
Somehow I feel used.
I feel no sadness nor happiness..
I feel nothing at all.
I wonder if a slight and gentle breeze should blow my way..
If it would make me lose balance and fall.
Will the one I am looking for save me...
Before it is to late?
Or will that person forget me and leave me in this darkness to stay,
If that is so, I already know, that it must have been my fate.
Author notes
I lost my mum on the 16th december - Im still in a state of confusion and keep waiting for her to come back.
Written December 19th, 2004
A contest entry
- Things you'll never forget by HappyGoLucky.
300 points, ended January 3, 2005, 20 entries
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VERY good
I really liked this. It just.. stuck a chord somewhere.
Thanks for writing it, keep up the good work. Good luck on the contest!
-Kris -
I feel like this. I feel like I've been slapped in the face by the one I loved and I know he felt the same way, until someone else came along. I feel like dying but I'm moving on.
This is a great poem. I like it a lot.
Thanks for the comment as well,
BleedingXSunday
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