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The Darkness

The darkness, warm all around,
you hide my imperfections, and
my sanity as well.
You come to me like a long lost friend,
silent and comforting.
In the dark most see nothing,
but I see all.
Void of al color.
There are no enemies here, just friends,
just loved ones.
At sunrise you say goodbye,
only to return and say hello at sunset.
A full moon makes you beautiful,
the stars among yo make you bright.
The darkness.

Author notes

I love the darkness, and anything black, void of color.
Written December 19th, 2004

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  • Whisper Mckee
    February 3, 2005
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    I feel the same way about the dark..like it's friend.

  • sorrowemotions
    January 22, 2005
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    Cool poem. It has a lot of feeling put into it.


  • January 1, 2005
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    too sweet I love this piece, your work is great and it was well written. you truely put your heart in all your work