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*Vacation*

Perfect locations.
Crowded tents.
Half dead batteries for old flashlights.
Starlit sky.
Getting lost looking for the bathroom at 3am.
Cooking meals on open fires.
Aimless hour long walks.
Riding waves at the beach.
Collecting seashells on the shore.
Catching fish with nets.
Climbing trees.
Roasting marsh-mellows.
Falling fast asleep.

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Written December 18th, 2004

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  • Ankeeta silver member
    February 7, 2005
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    perfect holiday

  • J89
    December 19, 2004
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    hey this is awesome! ur a good poet! : ) have a merry christmas!

  • presently
    December 19, 2004
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    excellent

    a child-like look of the world....and it fits the lack of structure.