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Talking on the phone

Talking on the phone
for the first time
Getting all blushed up
like the twist of a dime

He is so awsome
But he just can't see
How much he truly
means to me

I get to go to formal
with his best friend
but i hope it is him
That I end up with in the end.

Author notes

this is another poem for jeff buck at my school. Heis a great friend and he knows I like him but I don't think anything will happen between us the way i want it to.
Written December 18th, 2004

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  • Ms Raneika
    June 13, 2005
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    I remember my first time talking on the phone with my love one
    it was nice for the most part that's a long story anyways great write bought back memories p.s I hope your having fun in Sophisticated Fun! from your leader -Raneika


  • Jenn-Swenson
    December 19, 2004
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    awesome job!!!

    hey meg, how you doing? well thats cool that jeff is a good friend and i know how that feels, my best friend is a guy i like and ijust accepted it cause i wouldnt ever ant the relationship/friendship ruined by dating. maybe you could look at it from that way....its great to have a guy as a friend cause that will last forever...but relationships when you date guys usually don't...and usually the friendship will be ruined or will never be the same. i hope things work out the way you want it to with him but if not, the friendship with him will be forever. and thats always somehting to cherish and enjoyhaving from him. well great poem i loved it keep it up!
    love always,
    Jenn