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One song

How many times have i been dragged to concerts i never wanted to see?,

I don't know. . .

. . .But that adrenaline rush. . .

. . .Baby its what i live for. . .The moment i can lose myself in a mosh.

There's only one,

     Thats every truly special,

          where we all stood,

           In some kind of Holy place,

     No mosh Pitt,
 
     No crowd surfing,

              Just a serene Comfort,

       No fights,

         No pain.

We just stood in the same room,

as our hero's,

As he lead us into a choir chorus.

As we stood amazed in awe struck disbelief. . .Followed,


. . .I loved that night. . .My last happy memory.


But i have secret to confess. . .I didn't know all the songs. . .

I only knew half. But i stood at the front,

And sung along anyway.


One song,

Washed over me. . . I didn't care much for it.

One song,

I never really thought about.

One friend,

One night.


One Dark cold night. . .Deep deep on the night.


I lay on her bedroom floor,

. . .While the house around me slept.

I lay smothered in the dark.

In the feeling of calm,

Comforted by my loneliness, as i could hear other people breathing,

in

and

out

. . . There sat her radio. . .

A chord stung up,

Then your voice. . .reached out to my ears . . .and poured over me,

Like a rain pour of relief.

That tingled in the Icy cold.


I discovered your song that night.

As my tear filled eyes shone through the dark. . .

. . .And i knew you understood me.

That i'll never be alone.


I only wish i could of sung it with you. . .

And that room full of people,

who felt the same.

Author notes

This once again is an experience, so it aint one of my best.

Stupidly the song is \
Written December 18th, 2004

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  • funeral
    December 18, 2004
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    omg! i felt just like this at alexis! there was mosh pits and everything and then they played the super slow intro to polariods of polarbears and everyone was quite, every stood nearly still and just took the amazing riffs and peace, it was amazing. well the poem reminding me of that is amazing! fucking great poem well done/!


  • screwed up
    December 18, 2004
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    this is really really good babes yay my radio