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Hurt

The darkness creeps up from inside,
She thinks about what happened,
How many times he lied,
It felt like it just began.

She sits in her room,
Letting the darkness come,
The revenge is seeping through,
There is no love left,

He broke her heart so many times,
No one was there to comfort her
Everyone just acted like mimes,
They left it for her to deal with.

Well, she wont be left in the dark,
She’ll fight,
She won’t give up,
She’ll give it all her might.

She’ll get the revenge her broken heart deserves,
In the end she’ll come out stronger
And everyone will see,
Love doesn’t conquer.

Author notes

This isn't my best work, but it was just the spur of the moment, so i hope u enjoy it!
Written December 18th, 2004

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  • lipsofaprincess
    June 22, 2005
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    Hmm, wow for all the times we've been in careers/civivcs class and how many times we've been on those damn computers, i dont think ive ever gotten down to reading your stuff. So im sitting doing that exactly. LoL anywho this is prolly my favourite out of what i have read so far -thumbs up- Have an awesome summer hunee, good times, good times!

    Jayme-Lynn

    (oh ya i added a new poem finally!! are ya proud of me =D=D lmao) -hugs-

  • Neko
    December 19, 2004
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    hey hey thanks for the comment! i commented on one of urs it was great!

  • Mnaxcvkj
    December 19, 2004
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    Hey great poem hun!!! hehe... awwww... im gonna send you an email! READ IT!!!! love ya!
    ~Missy~

  • Neko
    December 18, 2004
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    Thanxs, i hope u enjoyed it!


  • Tipp
    December 18, 2004
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    It's a great poem, good job!

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