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Bye

I took all the anger
All the stress
Kept it inside
Unrevealing lies
Sleeping each night
Imagining horrors
The death of my lies for one truth
Was the one thing i couldn't handle
So eventually the darkness took over
And now i die with those red tears
All lost except those engraved comments
To make a change stay

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linkin park
Written December 18th, 2004

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  • Mig12
    December 30, 2004
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    Woah....

    Sounds like Figure.09.


  • neemuffin
    December 19, 2004
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    wow...very deep and the emotion was expressed beautifully...nice work!
    *~Neelum~*

  • pepper this
    December 19, 2004
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    I'm commenting on everyone's poems late,r but could you please put the artist and lyrics in your author's comments? thank you
    -Pepper-


  • triplea
    December 19, 2004
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    this poem had a very nice flow and tone to it.... there was a lot of emotion in it to... i'm a little confused on how the title fits in though... if you could explain it to me that would be great... but besides that i think this was a well written poem