God's Love
From above
God led me from temptation
I found my sweet Salvation
Victorious
Glorious
Let's praise the Lord
Sing in sweet accord
Forgive my sins
As rebirth begins
God's words spoken
Satan's grip broken
Save me from damnation
God's trial and tribulation
Celebration
Jubilation
Hallelujah it is my rebirth
Let's rejoice here on earth
From above
God's love
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Written December 18th, 2004
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'My Salvation'...
you give glimmers of hope in all that you write...
a blessing in it's self....
A lovely read...and we are so blessed by his great love for us....always the same yesterday, today and forever more...
thank you again dear Lady... for your lovely words/works....
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Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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well you sure up the ante because this will be hard to beat.it shows love to our Father and your faith in Him.you feel the sincerity of the words.this will be a great contender.
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Thank you so much for the nice comment Sam . I always appreciate your opinion. Take care, Sandy
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You have done an excellent job with this. It is such a wonderful form. All types of feelings can poetically explode with it.
Great work.
Sam
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Yes CelticLass, Love and joy are in the air as we are about to celebrate the day of our dear Lord's birth.
Thank you for a wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you indie you are so kind. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Take care, Sandy
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Weldon you are too kind but I am only a humble poet. I do not think of myself as great. I started writing in June and found Jesus Christ in July, I give God credit for all my writings. Thank you so much for the encouraging words. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Anna for your wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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Awesome
Wow, that's awesome!!! Great job, it flowed well and the words not only rhymed, but made sense and painted the beautiful picture of Salvation. Keep writing, I really enjoyed this piece.
~Anna
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Innovative
I don't know if something's in the air or what, but this is yet another great piece that I've read today. I love the rhyme scheme you used, it was great. Thanks for sharing! -
A lovely poem.. I love your flow and the message you put across...
"God led me from temptation
I found my sweet Salvation"
Such a brilliant line.
Keep it up,
Indie xx
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Well Sandy, I see you have made the contest a WHOLE lot harder to compete in, and the competetion was already too tough lol. A really great job, perfect in flow and form, with the greatest message. Excellent!
~Weldon
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Thank you so much Mary for the lovely comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment I do appreciate it. This was my first attempt at a wittiam. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment , I appreciate it. I love to share my Salvation with eneryone. Take care, Sandy
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Your words are so kind. I am a new Christian and God teaches something new every day. Yes Praise the Lord for He is so Almighty. Thank you so much for this heartfelt comment. It has made me smile. It is so wonderful to meet so many Christian on this wonderful website. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend. I always appreciate your talented opinion.
Take care
God Bless you
Sandy 
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Ann you always make me smile and feel good about my poetry. I still am learning. I never wrote a poem before I found this wonderful website June 22 by accident. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you Michael. I enjoyed your comment as always. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Chris. I am filled with the Holy Spirit and it feels so wonderful. God is so Almighty. He shows me more each day. Take care my friend and Christian brother. Sandy
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Thank you so much for you lovely comment Melanie. It is always a pleasure to read your poems and to hear from you. Take care my friend. Sandy
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Beautifully penned! The form is not only flawless but your rhymes are creative and unique. I love the content, filled with love and a spiritual grace. Thank you for a simply beautiful entry.
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Thank you for the nice comment. It is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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A beautiful tribute to our Lord.Perfect wittian form!Good Luck!
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I am always so impressed with your words...they are always so beautiful...and flowing.
You have a wonderous meaning..and explanation of your precious salvation. I love it...I love it....
Good Luck in the contest...
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Halleluah! Praise His name. Glory and Hosanna! This is splendid and magnifies the deity of our Savior and His mercy in granting us sweet salvation. This is perfect. The best to you in this challenge. You have done a magnificant job with this form. Old Doc Wit and Mary6 are going to have serious trials trying to judge this contest!
MAY GOD GRANT YOU ALL THAT'S GOOD FOR THE CHRISTMAS HOLIDAY AND THE COMING YEAR!
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Thank you my dear friend. I always enjoy your comments on my spiritual poem. If not for you I would not be a Christian today. God Bless you , Sandy
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A great Christian poem, I loved it- wonderful write Amazing poem, good luck in the contest
God bless you my friend,
Merry CHRISTmas
All the best,
Pozo
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most inspiring write!
Beautiful! I'm standing and cheering, how moving this is, gets one motivated to stand on the rooftops and praise His love! Best of luck, what an inspiring write! Sandy I see you expanding and reaching out to different levels of your talent! Bravo my friend, I have never seen anyone more devoted than you.....You have blessed us with your brillant work! All the best in the contest, I know Mary will love this! God Bless my friend, Ann
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Terrific
Terrific poem Sandy. It works very well both ways. Good luck in the contest. Take care and God Bless.
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Sounds just like someone filled with the Holy Spirit this one Sandy, and what a reason for any one to shout this out too, I’ve seen many beautifully filled like this over prior years, Hallelujah indeed.
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Sandy, This is a great write..It sure looks like a winner to me... Best of luck in the contest...
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ummm, this is like totally amazing... but I don't know what the word "Haleakala" means
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Hey, great topic for your poem! Actually our 1st line sound preety similar! Great write! Good luck in the contest!
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