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i have a memory of you

i have a memory of you
its rather veige, and of some time ago.
its you smiling,

im not sure if it was genuine or false
but it was powerful
and just for me.

and i thank you for an emotion
so memorable and true.

and i'll remember it
and i'll remember you
even though you left me, forever,
to suffer & transmogrify
but all for the best, i won't forget.

And for the feeling of feeling
I can never thank you

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Written December 17th, 2004

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  • natari gold member
    December 17, 2004
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    Wonderful

    This was a wonderful write and thought evoking...Reminds me of someone I once knew...Well done