little children
growing big
big people
feeling small
God's love
here forever
poor seek
undeniable truth
rich tell
unbelievable lies
sinners, aren't
we all
forgiveness lies
in Jesus
God's love
here forever
waiting for
us all
Author notes
Written December 17th, 2004
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i don't really understand what your trying to tell us. i like it though what ever it is. but i can't see why you didn't put a title. i have 2 titles i would give it. if you would like them you could ask me. maybe you should check out my first contest. if your good at writing song lyrics then this is the contest right for you. just write any song and you might win. think about it. thanx
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This is a great poem. My favorite line is big people feeling small. I think that it is so true. It is like apart from God that is all that we are children that are trying to act like grown ups. I really like this poem. I love the way that you write keep writing.
Rivkah -
The first part of this was kind of like "the geass is always greener on the other side" type thing. Ironic.
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Very good write about life and all we do or want to do.I enjoyed the read.Write on.Jim
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