Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The Moving changes

Moving,
Currents.
Simply changing.
Constant difference.
never the same.

Difficult hills swing this way.
Its greener on that side they say.
changes moving,
Difference is grooving.
It will never be this way.

Letting the engines run,
over those hills.
I'm desert bound.

Author notes

im moving
Written December 17th, 2004

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • moonbeamer313
    April 30, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    I love this. It's obvious that things must change, and that a lot of the time it's for the better, but it's still so upsetting that they'll never be the same as they once were. Desert bound--I don't know if that's a metaphor for the idea of being alone, but if it is, it's brilliant.


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    December 20, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    No shit Einstein. lol Really, I could tell by the flow of the poem. I hope you enjoy your trip, and it is not to bumpy. Eh? You are probably flying! lol Anyways, have a good move. Enjoy life.