Understanding the meaning
Of that long forgotten phrase
No longer wondering about
God or the universe
Peace is what is felt
And at peace is where I'll stay
When all is right with my world
Feeling like screaming
Lost in that misty haze
Of life, of love, of emotions
Keep asking everyone
What meaning they seek
Frustration is what is felt
And red anger is where I'll be
When the world is upside down in me
Wonder which world I'll wake up to today
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Written December 17th, 2004
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APPLAUDING!
I know I should say more but it's just a good piece.
It's sais what you mean, clean simple words..
Well done, nice write.
Merry Christmass
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Cool, its written different then most poems with this message. Good job.
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When the world is upside down in me << that deserves an applaud.
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Thanks for the comment Lady Raven ... nice not to be totally ignored...lol. And I enjoyed the "bites". Grin.
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Ahhhh, the world of ME. I too have that tho I try to remain in the I don't care it doesn't bother me state. Well said my dear.
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven
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