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Whisper

Silenced Whispers
Hear My Plea
Foolish Thoughts
Fly from Me

Time To Die
I scream inside
in a horrid deadly cry
Gun to my head
No one to Care
If I was really dead

Cuts down my arm
Tears in Streams
Nobody To silence
My silent screams


Silent Screams of Hatred
Silent desires of death
Silent Vows of disaster
As I brace for one last breath


'Don't..'
Was what a voice had said
Eyes full of tears
'Kill me instead..'

I was faced with care
as my eyes overshadowed in tears
The Gun was put down
As were many fears.
I closed my eyes
Thinking of what I was about to do
I cried on her shoulder
She cried with me too.

A thud on the floor
As the gun dropped below
Wondering why I let myself worry about the past
That Happened So long Ago

I was given a gift
A gift of Care
I was shown love
That I thought wasn't there.

Silenced Whispers
Hear My Plea
Foolish Thoughts
Are Far From Me

Author notes

^_^ I am so thankful for all of my friends who have been pulling me out of all of these thoughts I am tormented with Day by Day... things are getting better and I thank you all ^_^ Aisiteru Katy, Hayley, and Lexi
Written December 16th, 2004

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  • wishintreeUK
    December 18, 2004
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    A touching, personal poem!

    How very fortunate you are having friends who care enough for you in this way. Genuine friends will ALWAYS be there for you should you ever be in need whatever the cost to themselves. Our fears of life and what it brings toward us are so very real to us, they are a great part of our lives.
    This is a most powerful piece of writing, as many others will be able to relate to it, you have done very well to share your fears with us, I hope you continue to progress toward a brighter and happier future.
    hugs ~Katie~


  • redZ3 roof down
    December 18, 2004
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    Glad to see that event is behind you. This was nice reading. The last part is especially nice.


  • -Hinoto Dreamer-
    December 18, 2004
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    keep it up DAWG

    awesome ^-^ remember...its not across the street... or down the highway... XD


  • Miykie
    December 16, 2004
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    Oi! THis would be a banging song! whooo! Full of raw truth and emotions man This really rocks HARD! Keep writing this stuff! I mean it! It's needed! Need ya to pump it out! Fuckin' aye!


  • Can u see me
    December 16, 2004
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    Teh hope is better then me xP

    ooooo i likes this one hopies xDD
    that rymer this ish awesomist...
    and i loveth this poem!!
    just remember that I will always be there for you hopeh..no matter what

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