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Alive

Give me your hand,
do you feel it?

My heart
it's beating.

It's beating
because of you.

You are the only
reason I am still here.

I live for you.

I am Alive,
Alive for you.

Author notes

Wrote this one after we got into a fight(Tony and I).
Written December 16th, 2004

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