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Thy peace is so unchanging.
Thy love is so unrevealing.
A story twice told,
through the same lover's eyes,
but the eyes are directed differently.

Thy peace is so wrathful.
Thy love is so unwilling.
A love changes faces, and too
time and places, and in a heart
it hurts to loose, yet more
to gain the lost refaced.

Author notes

this is about moving on, and getting a new love, how very sad, confusing and difficult
Written December 16th, 2004

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  • sookie
    May 19, 2006
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    i really like this poem. it has a real old timeyish feel to it. it is revealing about feelings. and tells alot. it is a great write. GREAT JOB!!! keep writing stuff like this!! i enjoyed reading.