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To Be Free

Everyone has moved on
I'm still standing here
Hearing those wicked lies
telling me to run through the winds
Leading toward my enemies
Facing each comment and stair
Is no more of an accomplishment
I want more than life can handle
I want to be free

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iunno
Written December 16th, 2004

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  • tinasam
    June 28, 2005
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    great work! i love the last two lines, i can feel the energy!


  • HappyGoLucky
    December 25, 2004
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    Great

    wow..this poem is so true and it's really really good!! I can totally relate. Great great job!! I totally loved it!


  • Despairkitty
    December 17, 2004
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    I liked it. I was short, flowed nicley and the vocabulary was used well. I thought this was a great poem!
    Despair