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Love can't be denied

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When you love someone so deeply
with a love that grips you completely.
you want to be with them when you can
that's how I feel about you my dear man.
Obstacles keep us apart, we need to be near
that's what's happening now, to both of us dear.
your dreaded PC has decided to call it a day
that won't keep you away.
You'll find a computer so we can chat once more
our love won't be stopped of that I am sure.
Love can't be denied when two souls love so deep
we'll be together again, no more will I weep.
I have faith in your love for me, how much you care
you have proven so many times your love is there.
To have the kind of love we share together darling
is a miracle we never take for granted, it's so loving.
We will rejoice when you return to me once more
If by chance you can't, then I will knock on your door.




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Don't you hate it when the PC dies?
Written December 16th, 2004

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  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 17, 2004
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    A Natural Beautiful Love Poem

    Such a heart felt poem. You always seem to find a special way to express such wonderful feelings. You have a gifted heart. Each poem you write only shows how special you are. I love each of your poems youhave written. You possess such a sweet soul. Thanks for posting another masterpeace


  • jenelda silver member
    December 16, 2004
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    Thank you rock faerie, it is wonderful to have that love, but so hard to be apart isn't it? Thank you for your wonderful comment-Jennifer


  • rock faerie
    December 16, 2004
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    love this one.. cause that's what i'm feeling right now.. and no barriers nor walls can keep us apart.. no matter where he is and no matter how far.. our love will be stronger.. and we'll be together soon.. nice write.. penn on..