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Whispers Reach

Whispers reach
                    finding that faith
                                            where those greetings
                                                                          of nature
find solace
             within an echo,
Horizons
          met,
Yet within a resurrection
                                 silence speaks
                                                      that language of trees
where a breeze
                    whispers
                                in the cool
                                              of the afternoon
vows met
              in nature
                          where in a dream
                                                  dawn begins
waiting for the rise
                         of the
                                 full moon.

Dec. 14, 2004

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Written December 15th, 2004

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  • Zahhar gold member
    December 15, 2004
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    have to admit the spacing makes me kind of dizzy for some reason.

    makes me think of the rising of a full moon on a stark winter's eve, when everything is quiet and the trees sway lightly in the breeze. only an occasional call of the coyote maybe breaks the silence.

  • Cheesy Poof
    December 15, 2004
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    whoa...I think this is the best one I read right now...but I think there's one more ....but truly this is so good...I really like nature poems also..and nature...even though I don't write 'em...so now I appoint you to my official "Nature Poem Writer" for me to read keep it up...You are sooo good...
    ~Eric~


  • enymatik90-09
    December 15, 2004
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    "vows met in nature where in a dream dawn begins waiting for the rise of the full moon."
    This is very radical. . .