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Upon The Clouds

Memories that touch
                                     held in those cliffs
                                                               found
on the edge of time
                           where eagles soar
                                                    upon the clouds
                                                                          reach within
that horizon
                 and feel the freedom
                                              moment by moment
where eyes see
                     nature
                               at its purest
riding the wind
                     where they carry
                                           peace at a
                                                          single moment.

Dec. 14, 2004

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Written December 15th, 2004

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  • Cheesy Poof
    December 15, 2004
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    This is a great short poem...tis amazing the image you've painted inside of my head And that backround...is soooooo amazing...well..off to read the other 3
    ~Eric~