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Phantasmagoria

 

I live in a mirror, concave
boo scream turn around
i am the plague
ashes ashes we all fall down

I live in seesawas
rock paper scissor shoot
i'll prove you wrong
marauders stole the loot

I live in the artist
supremely individual
i am the transcendentalist
the creater, empirical

I live in the vagabond
litte riding hood wanders
i am the barren land
where she wanders she wonders

I live in the mind
hope you have the valor
i am the intellectual
so think and you'll find the cure

I live in what i write
the sky, urge, love, tree, grass
i am the words typed
remains of you in ink and ash

I live in Rimbaud
skies of insolent azure
i am the rainbow
grass of innocent verdure

I live in the late Blake
imagination transcends collects
i am the unworldly engraved
romanticist suffering from neglect

I live in fantasy auras
think thought thinking
i am phantasmagoria
live dead living

Catch me if you can

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Written December 15th, 2004

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  • enlightenedatheist
    January 3, 2005
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    this is a very impressive write. have yopubeen writing long or is this your'first time' so to speak? regardless it is a wonderful piece of work and welcome to AP! you are a very exellant writer thus far.

  • Benighted Eidolon
    December 29, 2004
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    Pretty impressive write... I just had to click since I have a poem with the same title, and I must say I was not disappointed, but thrilled that it was a beautifully etched piece of art. I must give you a hand on this one dear, good job.

    Gabriel

  • listen
    December 21, 2004
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    the flow and rhyme is amazing.i love the message in it,

  • GoldenHope
    December 20, 2004
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    :-)

    i love how you put all those little phrases into it!
    i c u put "catch me if you can" at the end.
    nice words
    xox JESS