Next to you
I feel safe
Put my head down
Close my eyes
'Cause there's nothing to fear
Next to you
Next to you
I feel love
Unexplainable
Wonderful
For no reason at all
Next to you
Next to you
I smile now
Finally here
Need not leave
Doubt vanishes itself
Next to you
Next to you
And next to you
I'm ready
For whatever the world might bring
Next to you
I can see
My blindness lifted from dark ring
Next to you
Blue eyes...
Author notes
Written December 15th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- someone who wants to fill the world with silly love songs! by Ladybug15.
315 points, ended January 25, 2005, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you very much!
You too Smores Girl
I really appreciate what you say. I really enjoy reading all of this!
Love, MJ
btw, Candy, let me know when you post new stuff, I want to read it!
Also, would you give me your opinion on "Counting Bullets"? -
just lovely!
lovely... i very much like this one... i have felt that way before, myself. when i'm next to that person, i don't worry about anything. hmmm... interesting. lovely poem. lovely wording. just lovely in general. it's very hard for me to find fault with your poems. you're good. keep it up, deary!
-meg-
Edited on Dec 22, 10:23 p.m. because ''. -
Wow!! I just read one of ur poems...that is really good!! I think we both may be "people of the night"..maybe I'm right, maybe I'm wrong, maybe I'm rattling on...lol...great read!!
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Great.. imagery... i like the very last two lines
Next to you
Blue eyes...
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