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Heart With One Motive

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Heart With One Motive

Under the cold rain
A long longing day
An Angel is waiting For wings, fly away
Under the Clouds A heartfelt sigh

Of another dream breaking
In a Life slipping by...unnoticed
Oh are you the sunlight
Or are you the Rain
Are you the kiss?

Oh, feel again...the claim
Of this heart with one motive
Walking fast no wonder
You see me everywhere
Two lovers are laughing
Eternity is theirs

A kiss in a doorway
A long languished look
A sorrowful leaving
Words of love in a book

Oh are you the sunlight
Or are you the Rain
Are you the kiss?
Oh, feel again...the claim
Of this heart with one motive

Oh, hear the wind it is calling out your name
Feel the Dream awakening you again
Taste the salt of a long lingering kiss
Has it come to this?  Has it come to this?

Ever in the moment
A coat wrapped up tight
A cold rain is falling
A glowing light is tonight

A wish with a scented candle
In the window it will rest
Hoping for you to see it
As you caress me in my long soft white dress

Oh are you the sunlight
Or are you the Rain
Are you the kiss?
Oh, feel again...the claim

Of this heart with one motive
Hold this heart it is beating
Again and again
Of eyes filled with wonder
When we meet my beloved remember when

Oh, you’re the sunlight
Oh, you’re the Rain
You’re the kiss within my lips
Oh, feel again...the claim
Of your heart with one motive


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Written February 11th, 2001

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  • Sharon Corr gold member
    January 8, 2005
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    Louis let me fly by your side
    I have wings and no one near to sing
    Oh if only I could touch the heartbeat of you
    I don’t know how to get my message thru

    I am sitting on one of the largest song files
    In the history of rock ‘n’ roll
    Who is the one who can sing theses songs of love?
    That continues to flow thru us

    I beseech of thee take me to the place
    In the sky were you reside and fly
    You know my heart is true
    I would give all these songs to you
    No strings you know I long to be on the side lines
    I don’t need anyone to know my name

    But I can dance and sing
    I hear what the singer sings
    Would you be so kind?
    To tell me once again
    When our songs of love
    Move you to the depths and breath you’re soul can reach
    I don’t know the road of rock ‘n’ roll
    But if one day you could take my hand
    And teach me to fly
    I will be there with you in the eyes of paradise

    I will give you all the song for free
    What good are they if no one can ever hear them sung?
    As you and wonder why
    We can write similar songs thru space and time
    Its just you and I remain connected heart soul and mind


  • delouisiano
    January 8, 2005
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    Great and gracious
    I love this poem, its rhythm is breath making
    Oh, feel again...the claim
    Of this heart with one motive
    Walking fast no wonder
    You see me everywhere
    Two lovers are laughing
    Eternity is theirs

    A kiss in a doorway
    A long languished look
    A sorrowful leaving
    Words of love in a book

    These lines gave me wings and i flew
    You need to see me fly
    louis


  • ravenofdarkness
    December 21, 2004
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    ah lovely *rav*


  • BonnieQ silver member
    December 18, 2004
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    Yet another awesome write, Sharron! And, of course, you've added my favorite Unicorn! Beautiful love song here, definitely a contender for the gold. Good luck in the contest!

    Love and hugs, Bon

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 17, 2004
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    I shall love you all night long
    Within an eternal love a million angels strong
    In your strong arms is where I belong

    How could I not know way back when the road of my soul
    As we ride your see-saw foretold
    On the wings and heartstrings of eternity I’m in awe
    I’m in awe that I could recall the love of you

    I’m in awe that I could feel the love deep within you
    And I knew I knew I knew the moment I met you

    I love you
    I love you
    I love you

    In flames of our beauty within truth
    O the long and winding road of our soul
    Tell me tell me will you hold me tenderly
    As I sing I am your lady

    Above the moon and beyond the seven seas
    As I long to touch your heartbeat that beats one within me
    Our love is an eternal love time has sealed
    Some chains can never be broken
    My love hath spoken

    I’ve loved you in every lifetime and in the herein now
    Now there has to be a way to find you somehow
    There is a place for us
    I burn within our touch of never ending love

    As I sing I long for us
    I long to hold you once again
    Upon the wings of the wind
    Forever we have been

    Our dreams are here once again
    Lovely to see you again my new old friend
    As you and I become the power of the sun
    We lie in each others arms inseperatable are we
    For my heartbeats and beats only for thee

    If only if only you'd come to me
    I could touch you o so tenderly
    As I long to taste your scent and breath in your heavenly presence
    I linger within a love that remains heaven sent

    You my beloved are deeply loved
    You my darling feel the fires that burn within us
    You feel my heartbeat as one within you
    As I feel the winter winds on my silken skin
    Oh to have you enliven me within your passion once again

    You my darling is where I long to be
    Forever one by your side
    As we glide into one love that rains in paradise
    Tonight is our night

    Tonight we dance and sing
    To a love that shall last forever thru the rites of spring
    We dance once more and sing

    I love you
    I love you
    I love you



  • Darr Kingston
    December 17, 2004
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    My darling love Angeleyes711 -
    How you arouse me with thy words
    in mine ears straight for mine heart.
    I love thee dear lady
    for you are my happiness of Romeus and Juliet.
    Little was he known by his true innerself
    though one knew him and died by his side.
    Our love is even a stronger love
    for inseperatable we always have been.
    From the first time unto the last of which will never be.
    I love thee again my darling and love thee true
    for you are my dear lady of hope and song.

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 16, 2004
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    Namaste Blessed Be my beloved ~poetscolumn~
    I call your name on the wings of the wind
    Where our heartbeats have forever been
    I call your name within our passionate flames
    Your name is just in upon the wings of the wind

    I call you to my heartstrings once again
    I long for your touch
    The night is sweetly singing in reverie I embrace our love
    I tenderly await our first kiss and touch of love

    Surely your love is sent within a million angels strong
    In your charms is where I long to belong
    I wrap you in my wings
    I give you all the love in a world that sings
    You my darling remain the happiness true love brings

    We love to see a lover
    We love to see you win
    Put no love above him or her
    This love has no strings

    In freedom I reach out my hand
    Your ladylove dances enchanted for her man
    We’ve revealed the plan
    As you lovingly take me by the hand

    There is no time that can separate love this strong
    In your strong arms is where I belong
    As we sing one love song.

    Echoing in tunes of
    I love you
    I love you
    I love you

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 16, 2004
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    Namaste Blessed Be ~Despairkitty~
    Love is our only need
    Love is the only reason to be

    You can see
    Our love is soaring wild and free
    And your words of love arrive as a tender touch of spring
    Within the found happiness true love brings

    This is the true beauty he brings out in me
    This is love divine shining brightly
    Deep within the wings of the wind
    Our love has always been

    When you climb the stairs to heaven
    You circle your love within the number seven
    You must feel despair to know the wings of I deeply care
    Then you know love that is sent from up above
    As we wrap each other in heavenly wings of love

  • Darr Kingston
    December 16, 2004
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    Excellent

    i see the power of the unicorn running strong
    as i hear the wind calling upon my name.
    For what is my name as I get lost in love?
    The sunlight bares from me as I glow into your song
    The rain and more falls upon me
    as I long your touch and embrace of sensual care.
    For I am he of thy desires.


  • Despairkitty
    December 16, 2004
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    This was simply beautiful. I loved the flow, the words, the entire scene that this piece painted into my mind.
    Despair

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 16, 2004
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    ~poetry within~
    I wrap you in my wings
    I give you all the love the sunshine brings
    Hear the world as it sings
    Heavenly melodies fill the silence of our new born spring

    Within the dawn
    He sings to me of his heartbeat
    As he lifts me above the seven seas
    Tenderly his love beats deep within me

    As two become one
    Within the power of the sun
    In the lines of Rock ‘n’ Roll
    Is the truth we’re one soul
    Foretold in legends of old
    One miracle of divine love
    Heaven sent from the angels up above

    In the power of three
    Is our heartbeat for all of eternity to see
    As I walk forwards thru the heavenly fires
    Within a true love of never ending desire

    Write on my friend
    This song will never end
    Lift us both higher
    In your love that finds me in rains of desire
    Edited on Dec 16, 3:38 p.m. because ''.

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 16, 2004
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    Namaste Blessed Be ~ravenofdarkness~
    A song in one melody to share our best
    As we rejoice within the deep waters of our heartstrings
    In love we shall forever sing

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 16, 2004
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    Rj blessed be for shining your lights upon my soul
    This lyrical song was penned a long time ago
    As I was learning form and content upon our heartstrings
    Wake me up in your tender spring
    Sing to me when you see me fall
    Above all I want to share my best

    In truth honour and honesty
    I post my songs then I search for a contest
    Only if I feel I can share my best
    I do agree with you I like the lyrics best in stanzas of four
    Your love and feedback I cherish in the eyes of heaven

    Once again we roll a lucky seven and eleven
    I stretch my wings to grow
    Upon the love and fires that burn deep within my soul
    Oh you light up my day when you sing of rush
    This is my dharma and my karma
    There is no rush like Ginseng RUSH

    In the sea of poetry
    Bless your wings that sing close to me
    Write on my friend
    This song will never end

    I agree with you Rj breaking this up in stanzas of four
    Is simply amour in wings of Je’tadore
    Feel free to rain your feedback on me forevermore!
    Bring me back home
    So these songs of love won’t roam alone
    Edited on Dec 16, 3:51 p.m. because ''.


  • poetry within
    December 16, 2004
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    simply beautiful and devine,
    such a tender peice to kiss my mind
    tantalize my thoughts with words that find
    their way into my soul,wrapping themselves around me
    and taking their toll

    kissing and tickling me with such delight
    as they speak of love found upon the night
    with scents of candles and flames of desire
    you my find and your poetry i shall always admire


  • ravenofdarkness
    December 16, 2004
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    nice sweet rav


  • Rj
    December 16, 2004
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    Good job!

    This is actually very lovely. It might read a little better if you cut it into stanzas. I think you may have rushed this just a tad to get it into a contest. It has a very nice flow, but you broke stride placing content over form. I think you are way good enough to have slickened out those few little bumps and hit a home run with this. But as it is it is still quite lovely. It has great sentiment and I believe that it would make a really sweet lyric.

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 15, 2004
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    I know I know I know –theheartofme-
    Thank you kindly for your heartfelt applause
    Your generosity is deeply felt within me
    Who is the one that can complete this destiny?
    I don’t know anyone who can sing this song
    You’ve inspired me to write the musical score
    So in the morrow I will get out my keyboard
    And see what comes to me
    But for this I really would love to work with other professionals
    Writing lyrics and music has only been a deep passion for me
    I never had the vehicle to express this within the music biz
    Maybe you can or you know someone who could

    I have to tell you one of the nicest Artists on terra’s shores
    Is the Artist SEAL he has been more than kind to me
    I actually sent him an email and I got an answer
    What a lovely divine angel he is
    I only want to remain off stage
    I would Penn for any artist who longs to be on stage
    But I know my place and it’s in the wings
    Oh I can sing but I need to be tuned and strummed my awakening
    Maybe you know someone out there
    Who can sing and pen the music to this song of sunshine and rain
    What can I say?
    Send HELP my way…

    All my love to you and yours forevermore
    What a joy to have you stop by my home
    Come and roam anytime you please
    And say Hello to your little four-year-old darling for me
    Oh the time goes so quickly you will turn around and one day he will be twenty
    I know I know I know don’t lose a day for all the love that is within your life today

    Sometimes you just know
    You just know the road of your soul
    I know I know I know I know
    How he makes me feel and I love him so

    Oh this is an unbreakable chain of destiny
    And in my heartbeat he is all I will ever see
    No one can reach this deep within me
    No one but him can send me to the full-blown moon

    I would search the seven seas
    For the joy your love has brought to me
    My love is found deep within your smile
    My love is found in your laughing eyes drive me wild



  • -theheartofme-
    December 15, 2004
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    i want music set to this, it is lyrical and just...yummaliscious? is that a word? the way it repeats, the flow everything is just right...WONDERFUL JOB

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