she surrendered her body
to the tight embrace of her lover's ropes
but he was not yet satisfied
it was not enough for him
to render her totally helpless
he wanted to take more from her
he covered her eyes
with a black satin scarf
and placed her in total darkness
deprived of sight
her other senses went wild
as his hands explored her body
every inch of her skin
became an erogenous hot-spot
as she yielded to his touch
bound as she was
she could do nothing
but let her inhibitions go
the touch of his fingers
on her hardening nipples
caused a flood in her thighs
as his hands worked down
to her moist womanhood
she quivered in excitement
when she could no longer
endure the long anticipation
she begged for his manhood
as he penetrated her
she began to peak
and screamed his name
such a powerful climax
racked her senses
that she nearly fainted
at last the lovers
master and slave
collapsed in orgasmic splendor
held in captive freedom
she had endured the darkness
to see the fullness of light
Author notes
choice #2
Written December 14th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Pleasured Pain by WickedLilSlave.
300 points, ended December 16, 2004, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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holy fucking SHIT you are one horny bastard!!!!!!! will you dominate ME?? please???
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Hot hot hot Liked this and how lovely she remembered his name lol
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Mmmm Tahuti I did not realize there was this side to you!
Well you have caught my attention now with this steamy little piece! I like it and enjoyed reading it very much! Best of luck to you in the contest!
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This is a well written poem. You always do a good job painting a picture in the words, even if the subject is not for everyone. Just continue to be your own person, keep writing.
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Awesome
Very Nice, Sensual.. maybe i do need to come play.. awesome write, I've often wondered what it would be like to be totally helpless to pleasure -
will do
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A beautiful poem darling. Please read the contest rules to avoid disqualification
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