...I'm sorry to hear that your grams has passed away, at least it was peaceful...I'm not really good at these things... Anywz...
I just wanted to make sure you read this...suggestion.
perhaps you could use Evanescence's Hello...~it happens to be one of my favorite songs.~ If you didnt know Amy Lee wrote it because her sister died... It's a really lovely song...And its very mello...Just purely vocal...~well not purely cuz u hear slight background sounds~ Anywz that's my suggestion.
Here's an entry...Cuz I have to write something...in this box anywz...
How sad.
How sad it is to see you sleeping there.
I wish now, was never...
I wish 'some-other time' was now.
Now I know your soul is somewhere...
In the clouds up above...maybe.
Someplace flying on the wings of a dove...
~sighs~
Now, I was never really good at goodbyes...
Just can't help these tears from falling,
These jewels these drops...I cry.
How sad we are...and how we miss you dearly
We lay aside these earthly cares,
With misted eyes...that just can't see clearly.
We say our silent prays...
~I'm not really good at prayers...but may she rest in peace.~
Author notes
Written December 14th, 2004
A contest entry
- For my Great-Grandma by Tetsuka.
300 points, ended December 20, 2004, 16 entries
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this was really great. Very heart felt and awesome. It's ALWAYS hard to lose someone close to you. Sometimes, Im not so sure if it is hard to lose your best frined or a family member. Either way it is really hard. Im so sorry about your grandma, Tetsuka, and to Weeping-Death, this was very awesome. You did a great jov on this for not being good at goodbyes. Honostly, no one really is. Anywho, great job hunn.
Love ~ Jess ~ -
Thank you very much it means alot
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that was.... pretty good
and i like how you added your own personal note at the top.. very personal and... sweet.
tetsuka - i'm sorry
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