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...Nothingness was sweeter.

Take It Back I dont want My Life...FUCK YOU AND YOUR WORLD
No more can I keep myself alive...I have no desire to live
Screaming silent tears of seduction...I cradle now, my hand.
With these slits now reopened ,deeper still I need to twirl my paintbrush
Slap on those : -Mercilessly-...-Plunging-...-Endless-...-Betraying-...
colors that paint life.
Where's the black and where's the white...all i saw was grey.
Still I am Lost. I am Depraved
-I- -have- -no- -reconciliation- so fuck you and your world...
-Appraise- -this- -fucker-, -this- -life- -has- -no- -value.-

Author notes

...random thoughts i just had clustered in my head...that are too stubborn to get the fuck out.
Written December 14th, 2004

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  • istalksk8ers
    December 21, 2004
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    wow this is awesome you expalin yourself so very well!! love it-dragon tails!! love tara great write!1


  • Hearta
    December 14, 2004
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    umm... ok... i just commented on a poem today with a lot of this in it.. but not all of it... hmm.. lemme find you the link..

  • Kuroi Neko87
    December 14, 2004
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    Excellent. You do a very good job at expressing emotion. "Screaming silent tears of seduction" that's my favorite line. I like the choice of picture too. Great work.