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Love and nature....
Written December 14th, 2004
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i like it a lot! descriptive and heart filled! Good job! 1-10...7.5! GREAT!
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great poem
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Another great one Sherry! Does this take a lot of time I wonder? You make it look so easy! I love it I just love it! Huggles,
Frogz~
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Yes some of them it took a lot of time some more then others the Tree wasn't to bad I don't think. I'm really proud of them because I never did anything like these. Not easy Sam here at allpoetry has some amazing ones to I always like hers even though mine are different. I appreciate you.
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Clever
See? You are truly gifted. I'll talk to you soon. I have my lava lamp going as I read.
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Thanks sis, you suprised me.
I didn't see your comments come
in glad I checked. I'm so glad you
like your lamp.
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Thank you so much glad you enjoyed this. Me
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Beautifully created Sherry...
although it would have been nice to see the tub created from poetry too...
still beautiful like I said though, thank you very much...
keep forever the art flowing through your pen
~Lilac~
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My tree is going to be in a book...if you ever buy it I
guess I'll sign it for you free its going be out next yr.
Sherry~
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i like this one lots to.. i like trees.. they so peaceful and never judge and they always there wen u need somewhere to go.. great write!
*hug~Turtle
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Thanks this one is going to be published I think next year in a children's book. I'm happy you enjoy these.
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A crafted artistic jewel of a poem.It message is every bit as unque as it's shape.~~Suseann
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I want to applaud you for Honorable mention.
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Thanks so much sis did you like my other entry? Your welcome I'm glad to be your sister ♥
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You are the best with shapes. Thanks so much for taking the time to do this. I'm glad to be you big sister.
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Thank you for reading glad you enjoy it.
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This is a really great poem and something wonderfully unique which is what I was looking for. Really sweet poem I can think of nothing wrong with it truly amazing.
Thnks for entering.
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Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it. Sherry
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Creative
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Thank you for taking the time to read this I had to place it on a white background it was on black:-) I have others hope you get some rest. We may have to exchange tea bags sometime for our eye lids or meet for lunch when we get up lol whos buying I will this time so hope ya be up:-) ((hugs))me
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COOL!!!
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Myra,
Its on white I hope its okay now thank you.
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Hey buddy,
Thanks I enjoyed chatting with you this am and even though its 4am I have to admit you've been a blessing. (((hugs to you)))
Me ♥
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Hey thats really good, you are really clever with these poems, my brain just doesn't think that way, I only see words in straight lines!LOL This one is really great.
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Sooo Lovely!
Dearest Sherry
This shape poem of yours stays my favorite -- I love the echo of the word "tend" ... LOVELY indeed! Can you perhaps send it to me on a WHITE background, Sunflower? If it is not too much trouble, Dearest -- I would appreciate that.
Myra
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Thanks so much means a lot I try.... Sherry
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I love it good job with the personification.
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Creative, i loved the shape
I think you did a wonderful job in expressing who you are in this poem. I loved how you used a tree instead of just saying I am...
Creative. Thanks for entering my contest and for following the rules. Best of luck to you!
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Hello and thank you!!
Yep its a tree hehe...Sherry~
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it's a tree! excellent.
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My Sis,
Thank you I did just had to get it copy righted as in sending to myself and have it registered. Love, Me
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Good job Sis. By all means let them publish it.You can't deprive the world of your talent.
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Thank you so much
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This is pretty clever Sherry. And full of gentle thoughts. And, congrats on getting it published.
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Thanks, dunno if ill have it published dunno.....thanks Cookie.
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Thanks Sherry~
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Well done with the sahep Sherry!
I think I commnented on this one before
Hope all is well with you
Mari
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Thanks for your nice comment even if I need to read the rules more carefuly next time. Sherry
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This is a nice tribute to a tree… very artistically created… thank you for entering the contest… good luck…
mina
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Well I've got two dogs and a baby on the way so I'd have to make sure to get something small and safe (not potentially poisonous). I have allergies to pollen and mold and other environmental things- I think the only flowers that don't make me sneeze are roses and lilacs. I did buy some of those and had my mother plant them in her yard for me. She's allergic to pines so we've never been able to have a real Xmas tree. Ah well, they're a pain anyways to water and clean up after
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Loved your comment thank you. Can you not have any house plants I got me a date plam the other day I love it. Sherry
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Looks like a cute little houseplant- maybe a miniature pine of some sort. Ah, too bad I have allergies or I would have houseplants like that. Very cute, nice job, and good luck in the contest!
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Thanks, but its more a christmas tree maybe a shrub can be a tree.
Sherry
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Looks like a potted shrub rather than a tree. Creative though. Thank you for the entry.
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This is ADORABLE. And the poem itself is absolutely beautiful as well. I love the personification of the tree, and how gentle and loving it seems to be.
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Thanks, and this poem is to you also (((hugs))))
Love and hugs, Sherry
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How sweet a message. You are doing God's work with these. Bless you sweetie.
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Hehe u can come back to it. (((((((Thank you)))))))))
Actualy I found one more a ice-cream cone glad u liked it Love,Sherry
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Oh, Sherry, thank you for sending me this link. I absolutely love this!!! I wish I had an applause left, cuz this is fantastic! love vj
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A very beautiful poem, both in form and subject, and carries a very serious message aswell.
I can see there is a lot of work in this, very well put together piece.
Excellent work
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Thank you for your beautiful comment on this.Often grammer is my worst I feel with writing. I am so glad you enjoyed this and it really showed by your comment on all three you read.
Thanks from my heart Sherry
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Very cute with a beautiful message!
This is a cute little shape poem. I loved the content of the poem, its message and meaning, the way it is structured in the form of a tree{its subject} and the lovely colours green and brown used for it. I also admire how you followed the techniques of shape poetry and used commas to separate the sentences. This poem has just three sentences but it is a work of art the way they have been arranged on this page. You've also used action words and feeling words very well. Very nice work! Thank you very much for sharing this.
Best wishes always,
Charishma
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Hey Kelly thank you I'll fix the grammer error soon. I am glad you liked this one thank you for reading it. I will appreciate the clothes you send me. (Thank you) and yes I will do that with the red cross or least good will but I'm sure I'll keep alot of it LOL just because it was yours Thanks Kelly ((((((hugs)))))Finaly got the pictures scaned will send them email to you
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No period needed after the word "care" as it is a continuation completing the last sentence. Other than that, this is very impressive, and I must say that you have improved greatly from when you first began to tackle these. The sentiments within the prose are so loving, from a caring heart, and rich with the attitude of "giving." BTW--Will have to figure out a way to send all the clothes I've been picking out for you. One box is full, and another one is near to being full. And, I've still got stuff to go through, because I know you'll enjoy them. Now, what you don't want, please drop them off to the Red Cross and ask them to send them on to the tsunami victims in Indonesia, Samalia, India, and just in that general direction. I know there will be a bunch you like, and they should fit. There's two brand new pair of jeans that fit me, but they're too short, so they should work for you very well. I think they're 550's. Anyhow, thought I'd let you know. I sure hope you can use them and enjoy them. Again, this is a beautiful piece of creative work. I love it! Love to you and tons of hugs. And, know that I will always care. Always.--Kel /:
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Thank you (((((((((Hugs)))))))))))))))
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wonderful picture poetry
Beautiful poem, very well done! A tree is a living thing, keeping nature in balance. I enjoy the way you compare the tree to a human being. I see many qualities of people in trees, plants, landscapes and animals. Living on the rural prairie one has many observation opportunities. I enjoyed this poem very much. You should be very proud of the content and ability to place in the shape of a tree. You have more patience than I do! God Bless, Sweetie. Keep penning! Happy 2005. -
Rene,
Thanks dear, was everything ok the other night we talked ? Still having trouble viewing the sight on the cable modem ? But can access everything else ok ? I don't get it oh and that chat room cant get these two places to be viewed normaly.
I use this wireless and much of the time it disconnects and I can't view backgrounds or images on the sight tonight. I wish I understand Tech stuff why computers have to act up LOL
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Dearest Dawn,
Thank you I am having a hard time viewing poetry on my cable modem server, won't display the page for some reason. Or takes me to another sight basicly. Then I try get on with this wireless that comes into my apt and can't alot times stay connected....LOL so Im trying to read on that- I can view everything else ok on it ? But can't pull the sight up or a chat room up on my cable modem at all lately. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas so glad you enjoyed this. Sherry
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Sherry~~
Very, VERY nice form piece you have here. It takes mucho patience to pull these off. But you did it. Not only with your outside form but with your content on the inside.
Great work Sherry!
~~Dawn
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This is so smooth and serene. I love this and your formatting is perfect!
Rene'
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Thank you so much
glad you enjoyed just something new I'm am trying to do lately. I did a snowman to hopefuly I can start a collection of them. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas...sant Sherry
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I really like this, I think it's very cute. I don't think I've ever actually seen shape poetry before but have known what it is. Very nicely done
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Thank you but this is the one I had before no changes on this one but glad you like its another one you hadn't seen.
there wasn't no sugestions of change on this other then I had to fix a typo thanks dunno what your mean by it being imporoved cause this is all the same as before other then the typo.
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A muchly improved piece!!! !!
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Thanks Sharon Hope I can do more of these...(((Hugs)) Sherry
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I think your imagination is unlimited!!!
(Some pics' are a lot harder to do than others, though.) Good Luck with your next project!
((((((Sherry))))))
Maureen
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Very, very nice Sherry! A warm and beautiful poem, giving the tree attributes as we have, I enjoyed the read. I have never tried a shape poem but it seems it would be difficult. Merry Christmas and may you be blessed!! Hugs,sharon
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Thanks not sure how many more of these I can do? LOL whats ya think??????Think I can do many more? Hmmm ? I like to that is if I don't get to frustrated or backwards my head can't lol.
Thanks dear and Merry Christmas One day I tried to do them on paper thinking to draw it out? Would be easier but seeing it and thinking it out and words didn't all connect or something thats what I mean lol...Hugs thanks!!
Love,Sherry
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Hey I got a early Christmas gift Myra coming by today yay where does flatery get someone Myra they in ya heart always? LOL well I mean it lol I'm always glad to see you and I thank ya from the bottom of my heart dear (((((((((((Myra))))))))
Love,Sherry (Guess ya didn't forget me) LOL!!
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Thank you gramps ((((((((((Merry Christmas))))))))))))))
Warmly ya grandchild at heart now and always, Sherry
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Don,
Thanks lol so am I back on it least in ya heart well that counts alot hehe... thank you love and hugs in friendship Love,Sherry~
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Very nicely done! A pleasure to read!
Very nice poem and tree, Sherry! I love trees, your poem and you!!
Love and Hugs,
<3 Maureen
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Lovely
Beautiful Christmas tree, with its Gift of neverending love ... How apt for this time of the year ... He being the Tree and the Gift ...
Myra
See?
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very cute............. brought a smile to my ol' face......
Don
ps... you were always on my favs... I moved it around some and I guess...oops... I accidentally dropped ya..... OMG... not on purpose!
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Sherry.I was able to read your beautiful shape poem today.It is very very well done both in words and in shape and deserving applause.Hugs.Gramps. -
Thank you and yes I'm headed right over there. I have alot alot trouble out of my laptop viewing backgrounds and pictures today sweetie. So now that I'm on my desktop and can see poetry backgrounds and pictures I'll be right on over Sorry been t rying most the day just see or understand whats going on with my laptop....(((hugs)))Reading yours now
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Love It!!!
So creative you are, my oh my, where did you get this idea, must be the season that inspired this I would guess, heehee!
I love the way you wrote this, and the form is amazing, I really appreciate the talent you have, but most of all that loving soul of yours!
Excellent Piece!!!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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Susan,
Thank you been having alot trouble out of my laptop today got my desktop running good now just got get used to typing on this keyboard again. Feels weird after using the laptop several weeks. Something odd is happening on my laptop I can view pictures like these I upload or peoples backgrounds on this sight ran a virus scan. Even a friend doesn' t know whats going on very weird. Going see if staples will take it back cause its just given me problems about three months. But today I can't even view backgrounds or pictures from it. I dunno why really but got this one working anyhows. Thanks for ya comment love ya hon
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excellent~
Another excellent shape poem hun
Wish I could do these wah
This is excellent
Love the poem and the shape of the tree
Claps hand
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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Sherry
It is still beautiful, my dear
Makes me wish I had a real Christmas tree, not a fake one
Love ya,
Karen
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Mariza,
Thank you sweetie Merry Christmas ((hugs)) Had a hard time today with seeing images on my laptop not sure why. Thanks for your nice comment so glad you enjoyed it. Love and hugs Sherry
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This is lovely Sherry! The tree and the poem and the feeling you put on it. Very well done!
Kisses,
Mari
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this was a wonderful tree poem..
Yvonne
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Laura,
Thank you dear Merry Christmas (((hug))))
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It's perfect Sherry!!!!! It came out just perfect!!!! ~Laura
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