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To love,
is to want more happiness for another than
for your own self.
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Written December 14th, 2004
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A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this seems more like a quote than even poetry.
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Thank you
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This is true love, and can be described in no metter words than these! Excellent! Of times we are so invested in what we want and how we feel that we forget to do that same things for those we claim to love. Volumes spoken in just one line. EXCELLENT!
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how true that is..nicely said..i also feel to love is when you would willingly take on that persons pain too set them free of it...this is a great one liner...hope you do well with it...leanne xxx
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Excellent
Perfect and perfectly said, Anulka; for, indeed, love is to care more for another than one's self, to seek the best for them, and to give all we have without expecting anything in return: not even their love. Excellent!
Good luck in the contest! Love and hugs, Bon
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