The sun reflects off her face illuminating
the inner beauty of her soul
She smiles and the world is all aglow
She speaks and chaos and confusion cease
She laughs and all are at peace
She cries and frustrations released
She sees only the good in everything
She bathes her soul in heavens spring
She bears the pain of those under her protection
Her arms their umbrella, know not rejection
Her gift to life is her very presence
She is my reward of excellence
She is the guiding light of my life
She is my wife
Mac
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Very good tribute. Great job. It was consistant and you had nice things to say that captured your audiences' attention.
Well Done.
TQOP
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She is ly guiding life, my wife! Love that line! To have a love like that these days is rare! Keep the faith and God bless you and your wife.
~Sie
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lucky devil
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Preliminary Finalist
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Ahh.....*speechles*
This is such a cute poem, even though its on the border of being cliche it is beautiful -
A beautiful dedication to the one that you love!
It's a wonderful feeling to have someone in your
life that makes you feel this way all of the time.
I wish you both all of the best in life!
Thank you so much for your entry here and I
wish you the best of luck with it in my contest!
Keep up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826 -
excellent!
I loved this one my friend.
I could feel the love for your wife.
Great job,
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awwwwwwww this is so amazing!
this is gorgeous!
you must have an amazing wife
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That is real sweet Mac!! A lovely poem written directly from the heart. Outstanding!! Everyone can tell that you and her are head over heels in love for each other. All in all, this is one of the best and sweetest poems on this entire site. Keep up the great job.
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Excellent
What a lovely tribute. Oprah said of Mel Gibson, that women see him as the most sought after man in Hollywood because he is faithful to his wife. And Benny Hinn attributes his power ministry to that very fact also. It is a very wise man who can see the value of his wife, and see her as his excellent reward. Well done. Heather -
Loved it
Aww this is really sweet. I loved it. The structure of this is brillent. I loved this line- She smiles and the world is all aglow
She speaks and chaos and confusion cease
She laughs and all are at peace
She cries and frustrations released
Now that was beautiful. Your a wonderful poet. Good luck in my contest, Your poem was well enjoyed. Love Zoey
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