Absurd Situation of Mentality

Manmade and a bit obscene
Perfectly bitter-sweet
Ticker is keen
To move faster than its beat

Unlife is fair
Tiresome ways
Don't smell the air
End of living days

You ask too much of me
Being your friend
I need to see
Push away from heaven sent

Keep away I lie
Remembering your face
Deaf to my sigh
Cutting the road lace

Confused and hiding
As loud as I can scream
Apparently listening
Is all you care to seem

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Written October 14th, 2004

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PINBALLxMASQUERADE
January 4, 2005
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This poem is very good. I must agree you are a very good poet. I love it!
Mj
December 27, 2004
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I did mean to write "unlife is fair". I don't know where it came from, but I guess it may come from the saying "life is unfair" or something.....
Smores Girl89
December 22, 2004
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did you mean to write 'unlife is fair'? i can't tell. could be a typo, you could have meant to put it like that. it has a meaning either way... anyway, i must say that you are a good poet, if i haven't already said that somewhere... good work, dear friend.

-meg-