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My Angel of Inspiration

Amy is but more than a name.
She is but more than a girl,
She is my angel.
When my day is as dark as night,
Her smile makes rays of sun peak through my blackest clouds.
To even question my feelings of fear when my angel is by my side,
Is but foolish.
Fear is but no existence in my world.
The assurance of her words blocks away every negative being.
The times that I am angry and ready to go off the top,
My angel is there to dissolve my feelings of angers with her soothing personality.
Of course my achievements are as precious as gold,
Therefore she is always there to grace me with praise in my time of glory.
To go hand in hand,
When times excite me all to well,
I share my days with no less than my angel and her gracious giggles.
While her giggles are truly pleasant,
My most happy moments are caused by her lovely humor.
The point of me comes from her.
She is my strength,
My relief,
My tears,
My joy,
My life.
If I was to ever be separated from my angel Amy,
I could no longer be.
For without her I would have no purpose,
No true way.

Author notes

This poem is for my angel, my best friend, Amy. I couldn't survive each day without her. Every person on Earth would be much happier if they had someone like her. I pray, that one day, everyone will.
Written December 14th, 2004

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  • LaAmyaArlene
    December 23, 2004
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    Im glad that your angel is still living. She sounds like such a great friend. Something like, my angel Jessie, that is now an angel in Heaven. Hold on tight to Amy!


  • MissMandiDoll
    December 14, 2004
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    Sry once again i had to get off and like i said there were two poems i didn't get to leave a comment on and this one was when my mom needed the comp so i'm once again sry.Anywayz this was a beautifully written poem.Your angel i'm sure would love it if she didn't read it yet or did love it if she read it.The flow was great and your emotion and feelings were so deep.Wonderful write.
    Hugs.
    Mandi