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Tyler

Die bitch
You motherfuckin bastard
You take my soul, my heart, my life
You sucked it all out of me
Your pulling me down
Into your never ending hell
I wish this was over
I know you do too
But the way we shaped our loveless lie
This will never end
Our fucking endless charade will never die
Slowly this will kill us both
Along with my fatherless baby
I hate you with so much of myself
I don't even know what I am
I don't even have the energy to deal with everything else
I hope your fucking happy,
I hope you want this rage
I have nothing else to tell you
Nothing else to say
There isn't anything I can do
But just so you know me
And I hope you know me well
You killed my life
And I'm going to make yours hell

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Written December 13th, 2004

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  • forbiddenLove
    January 21, 2005
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    hell yeah you go Chels!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Ilati Aza
    December 14, 2004
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    I know these little hugs don't always help but I want to try to help any way I can. Seriously. I may not know you very well, but I sure as hell would send money or something if I could. I know how it is to be faced with something like this, and I will help if you want me to or if I can. Even if I don't know you too well. It may seem strange, but... well, anyway at all that I can help....